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This was super helpful! I’m definitely going to start doing this. I currently had been trying to breakdown films and tv by just watching/reading and taking notes, but this more directed approach seems way more productive and helpful. Thank youuu!!

One thing I would love is to see your breakdowns and thoughts on sitcom/episodic comedy TV. I love writing and watching adult animation, and I would love to see your insights on how those pilots’ goals are a little different than a more serialized series (since many don’t really set up a dramatic question or goal for the season). Do you have any thoughts/previous articles I can learn from? Thanks again!!

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I have so many thoughts! But I haven't broken down a sitcom in writing. Would love to do that in the future for sure.

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That would be amazing!! I will be tuned in :)

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Audrey - this post was super helpful! I would definitely love to have some breakdown examples you have done to use as a guide. I am rewatching One Tree Hill right now and would love a comparable to see how much my takeaways align with yours. Have you already posted some breakdowns of TV Shows and/or Films?

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Yes! I've been adding more examples into my posts, and I have some breakdowns scheduled in the coming weeks that I'm really excited about. I was more of a Gossip Girl than a One Tree Hill fan, but here's a post I did recently about story structure in TV shows: https://audreyknox.substack.com/p/how-to-write-a-central-dramatic-question

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I'm going to start here and ask if anyone has the script for Hot Frosty that was the Netflix Christmas movie this year. I'd love to know what was written/sold and what was made.

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Did you know my client wrote Hot Frosty? DM me your email. I will ask him if I can share it with you.

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I would be very interested in reading your breakdowns. I often struggle with theme; having it present in every scene.

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Thanks, Missy! I don't think it needs to be present in ~every~ scene, but I do agree that it is in many of the best movies and TV shows. I do these breakdowns anyway with everything I watch (at least in my head, I don't always right them down. I want to get better about that!) so I think it would be fun to share.

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I drive my husband crazy, pausing and writing during movies.

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Our loved ones deserve so much for putting up with our constant script analysis lmao.

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